Twilight Charm

Hello, I am planning on make a deck using Disciple of the Forbidden Spell as the main card. From reading Will Lair's post in the OUR Charmer Deck!! about Disciple of the Forbidden Spell and yugioh wikia, this is the deck I just made up in YVD. Please note, I have not test this deck and would be nice to have feedback at where this deck fails and where it succeeds. So the deck list:

Monsters (20)

Disciple of the Forbidden Spell 3x
Dharc the Dark Charmer 2x
Lyna the Light Charmer 2x
Chaos Sorcerer 1x
Mask of Darkness 2x
A Cat of Ill Omen 2x
Breaker the Magical Warrior 2x
Snipe Hunter 2x
Nova Summoner 2x
Arcana Force 0 - The Fool 2x

Spell (6)

Gold Sarcophagus 2x
Swords of Revealing Light 1x
Monster Reborn 1x
Mystical Space Typhoon 2x

Trap (14)

Chain Destruction 1x
Elemental Absorber 2x
DNA Transplant 2x
Threatening Roar 3x
Magic Cylinder 2x
Bottomless Trap Hole 2x
Dark Bribe 2x

So, the purpose of this deck is to get Disciple of the Forbidden Spell out in the field and chain it with Chain Destruction to get the ability to choose two Attributes: Light and Dark. DNA Transplant is there to chain the Attributes to Light or Dark which allows for Disciple to use his effect to pop monsters. Also, Lyna is there to steal Light monsters and Dharc to steal Dark monsters. Elemental Absorber in here to block attack from the opponent's newly change Light or Dark monsters.

Mask of Darkness, A Cat of Ill Omen, and Gold Sarcophagus is for searching out cards like Elemental Absorber, DNA Transplant, and Disciple of the Forbidden Spell. Snipe Hunter, Breaker, MST, Dark Bribe, Chaos Sorcerer, and Bottomless Trap Hole is for removal. Threatening Roar, Magic Cylinder, Swords of Revealing Light, Nova Summoner, and Arcana Force 0 - The Fool is for stall. And lastly, Monster Reborn is to bring back Disciple of the Forbidden Spell back to the field to get a second chance.

Any comments to make this deck better is welcome. Thank you for reading this post and your help, if provided.